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第二档(4一6分)遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点，或一些内容与写作目的不相关。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。未能达到预期的写作目的。第一档(1一3分)遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。完全未达到预期的写作目的。零分未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。第二节：参考范文：One afternoon,I was surprised to see a group of students including Mary practicingjazz in the school playground.They were so absorbed in their music that they didn't evennotice me at first.When Mary saw me,she warmly invited me to join them.I was hesitant,unsure if I could keep up with their skill level."Just give it a try,sugar,"Mary said with afamiliar smile."As the members of the school music club,we're all here to have a goodtime.It was then that I realized the true spirit of New Orleans wasn't just in its people,butin the way they embraced life and each other.Finally,with Mary's encouragement,my hesitation slowly melted away.I picked up atrumpet,feeling its weight in my hands.Thankfully,the sound was surprisingly uplifting.As the group resumed their practice,I tentatively joined in,and I found a rhythm thatcomplemented the jazz melody.My heart pounded in my chest,but the supportive smiles fromthe club members,especially Mary,made me feel at ease.After a few weeks,I became anintegral part of the music club.We practiced after school,with our instruments merging therich musical forms of New Orleans.一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：(1)创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。【高二英语·参考答案第9页（共10页）】·24-536B·
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